支招小作文(229) I 动态线图 四个国家医疗花费

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The graph below shows the average spending of four European governments on health per person(in Euros) from 2006 to 2013.

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主体段分段:

Body 1:Belgium、Italy(整体数值较大)

Body 2:UK、Iceland(整体数值较小)

开头段

The line graph illustrates changes in per capita government spending on healthcare in Belgium, the UK, Iceland, and Italy between 2006 and 2013.

概述段

Overall, almost all the countriesexperienced an increasein their government health expenditure, with the exception of Belgium.Among them,Icelandrecorded the slowest growththroughout the period.

思路要点:

- 除了Belgium之外,其余三个国家上升

- Iceland变化幅度最小

Body paragraph 1

It is clear thatBelgium and Italyconsistently spent moreon health compared with other two countries. Belgium’s spendingrose steadilyfrom €5,000 in 2006 to a peak of €6,000 in 2009,beforedropping sharplyto to €3900 in 2012.This was followed bya slight increaseto €4000 by 2014.Similarly,Italyexperienced a gradual growthfrom €2900 to €4500 during the same period.AfterovertakingBelgium’s spending in 2012, Italy becamethe highest spenderamong the four countries.

思路要点:Belgium、Italy

- Belgium、Italy数值整体较大,2012年之前排第一、第二位

- Belgium:2006-2009年从€5000逐步上升到€6000→随后剧烈下降到2012年为€3900→2013年小幅上升到€4000

- Italy:2006-2014年由€2900逐渐上升到 €4500;2012年超过Belgium,2013年四个国家中排第一

Body paragraph 2

In contrast,the UK and Iceland allocated less government funding to healthcare. The UK’s spendingnearly doubled to€4,000 by 2012,followed bya slight decline of€1,000 in 2013.Likewise, Iceland alsoexperienced a modest risefrom €2000 to €3000 in the first six years,after whichthis figureleveled offuntil 2013.

思路要点:UK、Iceland

- UK、Iceland整体花费较小

- UK:2006年到2012年几乎翻倍达到€4000→2013年小幅下降了€1000

- Iceland:2006-2012年从€2000小幅上升到€3000→到2013年保持平稳

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